Sample Novelization for English 326
(Original Scene in Miller's Play)
Arthur Miller's The Crucible

 

Laura Hagle

Introduction

         It was the spring of 1692 in Salem, Massachusetts.  The town was in a frenzy over the belief that the quiet simplicity of their lives has been injected with the evil seed of witchcraft.  The fervor started when a teenaged girl, Abigail Williams, to avoid punishment after she and the other girls of the town were caught dancing in the forest late at night, claimed that she had been bewitched .  Following her example, the other girls joined in, and made accusations against the townspeople for causing them to behave in such a manner through witchcraft.  Additionally, the girls started suffering from peculiar afflictions such as sudden coldness and fainting spells.  Soon those accused as witches were put on trial and hanged for their crimes against the girls and the Church.  Realizing her opportunity, Abigail accused the wife of John Proctor, the man she had been having an affair with.  With Goody Proctor out of the way, John would be free to belong to Abigail, and she was determined that it would be so.
         John, one of the few in the town with a sensible mind, rejected the idea that witches were responsible for the girls' grief.  Rather, he suspected it to be a concoction of lies created by the girls themselves.  Outraged by the apparent lack of rationality in the judiciary officials as well as the commoners for believing the girls' story, John made a desperate attempt to convince the court of the falsehood and save the innocent people found guilty of witchcraft.  He had convinced one of the girls, Mary Warren, to tell the truth and seek redemption for perpetrating deceit on the people of the town.  They now stand in the courtroom along with the head judge, Danforth, the two other judges, Sewall and Hawthorne, and Abigail's uncle, the Reverend Parris.  Also present is the Reverend Hale who was brought to the town as the expert to determine if witchcraft was indeed running rampant in the town of Salem.

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        John stood with a strong arm around Mary's shoulders, providing her with support in order to keep her weakened body from collapsing into a heap on the floor.  The stress that had been imposed on her was so great that she barely had the strength to stand, and she quivered with fear thinking about what she had come here to do.  It was easy to sign the document that John had written earlier telling her confession.  But now, in front of Judge Danforth, she was as weak and timid as a newborn foal, with wobbly legs and a fear of the imposing world around her.  She looked at the piece of paper that John clutched desperately in his hand, his arm outstretched in an appeal to be heard.
        "Mary Warren's deposition, sir.  She swears upon her immortal soul that she lied and her friends lie now.  They never saw Satan and no witch ever hurt them.  And this is the truth, sir," he pleaded.
        Danforth took the document from John's hand and read it carefully, word by word.  That the paper he held conveyed the real truth sank slowly and unwelcomedly into his being.  He would not, however, yield to the feeling and remained stalwart in his decisions on the matter.  In no way did he want to reveal himself as a fool and subject himself to the wrath of the town and of God for putting so many innocent people to death.  The unfaltering stony expression he wore on his face gave no one any indication of the doubt now planted in his mind.  After reading the last word, he raised his head and looked at John.
        Reverend Hale, who had been standing by and witnessing the scene, felt the pit in his stomach deepen with every second that ticked by.  It was he that had originally been the one to "judge" the presence of witches in Salem.  He warned the townspeople not to look on what was happening with superstition, and he vowed to himself to remain neutral, but it was easy to get caught up in the fantasy that had been created.  After all, he was there and he saw what was happening.  He saw the girl who would not awaken and heard her frantic parents blame it on the servant girl who had supposedly cast a spell on their daughter.  He watched as Abigail and the other girls fell to the ground clutching their bellies in pain and pointing to the "witches" causing them injury.  He heard the accused proclaim their innocence and their unrelenting devotion to God.  He then heard them admit their guilt of having an alliance with Satan to save themselves from feeling the Hangman's noose.  He had not squashed the ember he saw glowing when he first arrived and now it was a raging fire that burned out of control and consumed everything at a frightening pace.  He blamed himself for failing in his original task and was determined to help right the situation as best as he could.  "Excellency, clearly this goes to the heart of the matter," he insisted.
        Danforth turned to him and gave a nod acknowledging his agreement.
        Hale pushed on.  "In God's name, sir, a claim so weighty cannot be argued by a farmer; send him home and let him return with a lawyer."
        "Now look you, sir . . . "
        "I have signed seventeen death warrants!" Hale cried.  "This argument you must let lawyers present to you!"
        Danforth stared at Hale and coolly replied,"For a man of such terrible learning, you are most bewildered, Mr. Hale.  Do forgive me.  I have been forty-two year at the bar, and were I called to defend these people, I promise you I should be confounded."  He then turned to address the entire company.  "Consider now that in an ordinary crime, witnesses are called to prove guilt or innocence.  But witchcraft is an invisible crime; therefore who may witness it?  The witch, and of course, the victim.  Now we cannot expect the witch to accuse herself, can we?  Therefore we may only rely upon her victims, and the children certainly testify!  Therefore, what is left for a lawyer to bring out?"
         Hale attempted to appeal with reason.  "But this one claims the girls are not truthful......
        "But that is precisely what I am about to consider," Danforth asserted.  "What more may you ask of me?  Mr. Herrick," he directed to the court's Marshall, "bring the children here!"
        As Herrick left the room, Reverend Parris interjected, "I should like to question Mary."
        Infuriated by the request, Danforth responded,"Will you be silent!"
        Shocked at the judge's sudden outburst and embarrassed at being chided, Parris mentally defended himself.  After all, it was he who discovered the girls dancing in the forest that first night.  Given that, he thought that he might be useful in getting to the bottom of the situation.
        As they waited for Herrick to return with the girls, the tension in the air thickened and the silence was deafening.  Finally, a knock on the door sounded the return of Marshall Herrick.
        "Enter!" Danforth yelled.
        The thought of having to face Abigail and the other girls broke Mary down and she began to cry.  She watched as they walked to the bench Danforth indicated to them to sit in.  Of course Abigail was in front, leading them on as she had done through the whole thing.  Knowing this filled Mary with increasing dread.  She knew that she was on her own unless Abigail confessed, because the power that Abigail had over the other girls was immense indeed.
        Danforth directed his attention toward the girls.  "Children, the Bible damns all liars." He looked at each girl individually as he spoke.  "Your friend, Mary Warren, has given us a deposition stating that she never saw familiar spirits, and was never attacked by any manifest of the Devil.  She claims as well that you never saw these things either, and that you are all pretending."  Turning to Proctor and Mary he said "Now it may be that Satan has conquered Mary, and sent her here today to distract our sacred purpose.  If so, her neck will break for it."
        Upon hearing this Mary's strength faltered and she leaned more heavily on John.  He, in turn, worried that he had not done right in vehemently convincing her to confess.
        The judge continued.  "But if she speak true, I bid you all, confess your pretense now.  A quick confession will go easier with you.  Abigail Williams, is there any truth in this?"
        "No, sir," replied Abigail innocently.
        "Did you see Goody Proctor's spirit and did she stab you as you have charged?" questioned the judge.
        "Goody Proctor sent her spirit and it stabbed me."
        After hearing this Danforth turned toward Proctor.  "If she is lying, it can only mean she would see your wife hanged."
        Knowing that admitting his affair with this girl would ruin him, the thought of her having this power over him and the town urged him on.  "She would wish that, sir."
        "This child would murder your wife?"
        "It is not a child." Proctor struggled with his conscience and his pride.  He did not know if he truly possessed the strength to confess of the sin he had committed with Abigail.  He thought back to the day when she pointed her soiled finger at his wife with.the charge of witchcraft.  She showed no regret or remorse, but smiled victoriously.  It was only for an instant, but John saw it as if it were the sun scorching his face on the hottest summer day.  With that thought in mind he shouted, "It is a whore, Mr. Danforth!"
        "He lies, he lies!" Abigail screamed.
        Proctor would not be silent any longer.  "I have known her, sir.  I have known her."
        Astonished, Danforth asked "In what time, what place?"
        "In the proper place, where my beasts are bedded.  My wife, my dear good wife saw her for what she is and put her out on the highroad.  And being what she is, a lump of vanity, she thinks to dance with me on my wife's grave.  And well she might.  God help me," he cried, "I lusted!  For this is a whore's vengeance now." He bowed his head as his spirit was almost completely broken.  "I place myself entirely in your hands now."
        Blanched, Danforth turned his attention to Abigail.  "Do you deny every scrap and speck of this?" he provoked.
        Feeling that she was now on shaky ground she became defiant to combat the assault against her.  "If I must answer that question I will leave and never come back, and I will tell the world that Satan has won Salem!"
        "Your Honor," Proctor pleaded, "what man will cast away his good name?"
        Danforth's gaze grew heavy on Abigail as he scrutinized the girl before him.  She felt the entire weight of it and his eyes burned right through her.  She felt as if her body was on fire.  Unable to withstand anymore she yelled.  "What look do you give me!  I will not have such looks!" With her hands balled into fists by her side, she turned sharply and started for the door.
        "You will not leave this room!" The sound of Danforth's demanding and angry voice stopped her in her tracks.
        "Mr.  Parris, go to the jail and bring Goodwife Proctor here."
        Parris objected to the judge's request.  "Excellency, this is all a snare!"
        "Bring her!"
        Knowing he would not win the battle, Parris obeyed the request and left for the jail.
        "Now we shall touch the bottom of this swamp.  Your wife, Mr. Proctor, you say is an honest woman."
        "In her life, sir, she have never lied," he attested, hoping to assure his wife's integrity.
        Danforth continued.  "And when she put this girl out of your house, she put her out for a harlot, and knew her for a harlot."
        "Aye, sir, she knew her for a harlot."
        With that, Danforth confronted Abigail.  "If she tell me, child, it were for harlotry, may God spread His mercy on you!"
        Outside they could hear the rumble of the wagon as it approached the courthouse.  For John, each second that passed seemed to last an eternity.  He felt like he was in Hell being punished for his sins.  God had slowed down the hands of time to keep John from being saved by his wife.  His good, loving, faithful wife.  He thought that he couldn't ever in his life have a moment worse than this.  Then came the knock on the door.
        "Hold!" shouted Danforth.  He peered at Abigail.  "Turn your back!"
        Her mouth fell open in angry protestation.
         "Turn your back!"
        Her eyes narrowed and she turned slowly showing her reluctance.
        Danforth then directed John to do the same.  To all he said, "No one may speak or gesture aye or nay.  Mr. Herrick, report this testimony in all exactness." Then he raised his voice and yelled "Enter!"
        Elizabeth Proctor entered the courtroom.  Her sunken expression gave testament to the worry for herself and her family that had filled her days.  Her clothes and hair were soiled from having been in the jail for a long period of time.  She searched the room with her eyes hoping to find John.
        "You will look at me only, Goody Proctor, in my eyes only," commanded Danforth.  "We are informed that at one time you dismissed your servant, Abigail Williams."
        Elizabeth nodded.
        "Why?  For what cause?" Danforth prodded.
        Elizabeth tensed, looked to John.
        "You need not look at your husband, the answer is in your memory!  Why did you dismiss Abigail Williams?"
        She knew well enough what was in her memory.  She had agonized over the truth for many days and nights.  Her husband had bedded down with another woman.  No, not a woman.  A girl.  The girl that stayed in their house and helped care for their children.  It was Abigail.  The memory of the day that John had confessed to her was as vivid in her mind as if she were reliving it. And she did relive it, every day.  But how could she stand there and tell the world of what her husband had done?  She couldn't.  She simply said "She dissatisfied me . . .  and my husband."
        "In what way, dissatisfied you?" asked Danforth.
        "She were......  She again looked at John.
        Danforth was becoming angry.  "Look at me!  Were she slovenly?  Lazy?  What was it?"
        Elizabeth could feel herself start to break down.  "Your Honor, I . . . My husband is a good and righteous man.  He's never drunk or wasting his time at the shovelboard, but I were a long time sick last year, and I thought I saw him turning from me.  And this girl . . ."
        Danforth became increasingly impatient.  "What of Abigail Williams?"
        "I came to think he fancied her. . . and so on one night I lost my wits, I think, and put her out on the highroad."
        "And did he indeed turn from you?"asked Danforth.
        "He . . ." She paused.  She was on the verge of revealing the truth.  If she did it she would save herself.  But she could not save the others who stood accused and those who had already died.  She could, however, save John.  She could not betray him.  It was the most unselfish thing she could do and she wanted to do it.  At the risk of damning herself and losing the grace of God, she would lie for him.
        Danforth had had enough of her stalling.  Forcefully he asked, "To your knowledge has John Proctor committed the crime of lechery?  Is your husband an adulterer?"
        Barely able to speak, Elizabeth replied "No, sir."
        Outraged, Danforth yelled to Herrick.  "Remove her!"
        John's world collapsed around him, but not for the fact that she had let him down.  She had lied for him and the thought that she would go against what she believed in for him made him feel that there was no redemption for what he had put her through.  Desperately he cried out to her.  "Elizabeth, I've confessed it!"
        She felt her legs giving way.  "Oh God!" She collapsed.

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        Elizabeth was taken from the courthouse and Abigail, realizing that she had won, began an assault on Mary to punish her.  The other girls followed suit and Mary was left pleading with them to spare her from the torment.  Once the questioning eyes of Danforth fell upon her, she was consumed with fear of being hanged and accused John of bewitching her.  He was then taken away and put in jail.  It was determined that Elizabeth was with child, so her life would be spared until she gave birth.  In a desperate attempt to save John's life, Reverend Hale appealed to her to convince John to confess to witchcraft so that he would not hang.  She refused saying, "He have his goodness now.  God forbid I take it from him." In the end, John would not confess to witchcraft and was consequently hanged.
 

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